For that crappy review
I actually enjoyed this,
I myself hate stories that are narrated but this one takes the cake for me.
And i will always remember 'There is NO such thing as a perfect date.'
brilliant stuff mate, hopefully there will be more?
10/10
Story was original
Narration was Tres Bien [Very good]
Characters where somewhat original
but all in all, it was a great story and i do love the narration on this story.